"grey dawn sleep" is what grabs my mind here because that sleep is often grey and cold inside and out. But birdsong turns it to light and hope. This speaks to me in many ways, Sandy.
I'm sorry - I thought I had gotten to everyone, but it seems somehow I skipped you. So glad I found out! I've enjoyed this "dream twilight" as well - it is lovely.
I tried so hard to shift my focus from the literal for this week's prompt and couldn't. I love what you (and others) have shared as your responses ... blurring edges of consciousness! Beautiful Haiku! Hugs and blessings,
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I love the way the sun and birdsong beckon me to greet a brand new day! Such a lovely way to awaken each day!
"grey dawn sleep" is what grabs my mind here because that sleep is often grey and cold inside and out. But birdsong turns it to light and hope. This speaks to me in many ways, Sandy.
Nice, Sandy, very nice! :D
How beautiful! I ended up drenched in gloom and anger doing this week's theme and here you have made it beautiful and inspiring.
aaaaahh! my very favorite time of day, for just the reasons in your words!
This IS inspiring. What a beautiful response to the prompt - the scene you create with so few words is bliss.
"through thin dreams" -- lovely image.
And thank you for that spirit nourishing video.
I can actually feel this haiku. Memories of times past. Marvelous.
I love the phrase "through thin dreams in grey dawn". Really nice.
I like "Dew Drenched",Great imagery.
Beautiful haiku and your video is refreshing to my spirit.
dew-drenched, lovely! that't capturing the essence of the morning in a short poem. thanks for sharing this.
i love the rising after being dew-drenched, very moving
Gee . . . when I wake up drenched, it usually signals a hot flash . . .
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To take so few words and create such a vivid idea, is a great gift. Nice work Sandy.
Dew drenched..I simply loved this!
ravages of time
I've woken up like this - so well-rendered in this short poem.
..expressed with aesthetics and lucid imagination,thanks for sharing..
Sandy,
I'm sorry - I thought I had gotten to everyone, but it seems somehow I skipped you. So glad I found out! I've enjoyed this "dream twilight" as well - it is lovely.
I love your last line, particularly "dew-drenched." Wonderful, as always.
I love the combination of "sun and birdsong". Leaves me in thought of hope. Beautiful poem
I love this use of bleed.
I tried so hard to shift my focus from the literal for this week's prompt and couldn't. I love what you (and others) have shared as your responses ... blurring edges of consciousness! Beautiful Haiku!
Hugs and blessings,
'water echoes spring' is such a beautiful line. i love photographing the marsh (nice, still water!) when the first leaves of spring peek out
oh, to dreams!
and more...
i really love this reflection of the nature here too!
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